Scheduler Timeline Demo: Update Description Following Feedback (#33248)

Author: arman-boyakhchyan

apps/demos/Demos/Scheduler/Timelines/description.md

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-A Timeline view displays an appointment sequence on a horizontal scale. The DevExtreme [Scheduler](/Documentation/Guide/UI_Components/Scheduler/Overview/) ships with four [timeline views](/Documentation/Guide/UI_Components/Scheduler/Views/View_Types/#Timeline_Views):
+Our Timeline view displays appointment sequences across a horizontal scale. The DevExtreme [Scheduler](/Documentation/Guide/UI_Components/Scheduler/Overview/) ships with four [built-in Timeline views](/Documentation/Guide/UI_Components/Scheduler/Views/View_Types/#Timeline_Views):
 
 - Timeline Day
 - Timeline Week
 - Timeline Work Week
 - Timeline Month
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-This demo allows you to try/review the following Scheduler capabilities: 
+This demo allows you to explore the capabilities of our Timeline view:
 
-- Switch between Timeline view types using the [View Switcher](/Documentation/Guide/UI_Components/Scheduler/View_Switcher/) toolbar item.
-- Enable "Snap to Grid" capability for all appointments or short appointments only (shorter than two cells in duration). For additional information, see [snapToCellsMode](/Documentation/ApiReference/UI_Components/dxScheduler/Configuration/#snapToCellsMode).
-- Note how the Scheduler groups appointments by resource to separate low and high priority tasks. For additional information, refer to the following technical demo: [Scheduler - Grouping by Resources](/Demos/WidgetsGallery/Demo/Scheduler/GroupingByResources/).
+- You can switch between Timeline view types using the [View Switcher](/Documentation/Guide/UI_Components/Scheduler/View_Switcher/) toolbar item.
+- You can enable our "Snap to Grid" option for all appointments or short appointments only (shorter than two cells in duration). For additional information, see [snapToCellsMode](/Documentation/ApiReference/UI_Components/dxScheduler/Configuration/#snapToCellsMode).
+
+Note how the DevExtreme Scheduler groups appointments by resource to separate low and high priority tasks. For additional information, refer to the following technical demo: [Scheduler - Grouping by Resources](/Demos/WidgetsGallery/Demo/Scheduler/GroupingByResources/).