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This commit makes minor edits to the README.

@clairecadman clairecadman requested a review from RandomNoun7 March 7, 2019 18:13
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> This `sid` does not look like a normal `sid` you might see outside of SQLServer, but it is returned as part of the detailed information to make it easier to correlate the logins returned by this module and query results from SQLServer.
> The `ADSID` property is a more normal looking `sid` you might get from PowerShell Active Directory query tools.
> It is a direct translation of that `SQLSID` into the Microsoft string `sid` form and will look something like `S-1-5-80-1402415987-66678372-3059512406-1823130485-2345841878`.
> This `sid` does not look like a normal `sid` you might see outside of SQLServer, but instead it is returned as part of the detailed information to make it easier to correlate the logins returned by this module and query results from SQLServer.
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I don't think the word instead is needed here. The fact that it's being returned in the detailed information is not an alternative. The but here is to explain why it is that I'm returning data that may not look familiar to the user and to explain why.

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@RandomNoun7 I updated this.

@clairecadman clairecadman force-pushed the sqlserver_doc_edits branch from 8fa07a3 to 14ce415 Compare March 8, 2019 10:52
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@RandomNoun7 I think the formatting is back to how it was now. Let me know if this looks okay. Thanks!

@RandomNoun7 RandomNoun7 merged commit d5e2de1 into puppetlabs:master Mar 11, 2019
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